Feedback:
The idea is sound - as Sheffield & Music go together well
The distribution channel is good, BUT you didn't specify this in the presentation. You should have included this in your pitch as its key to the success of the magazine.
Finances - you have costed the magazine well, but the revenue streams weren't obvious - this should be clear too
Improvements:
To improve my pitch will by being speistic about where my magzine will be able to be bought and sold I will do this naming shops and cafe.
To further improve my Pitch I will talk in depth about how I will create revenue streams through the magazine. I will do this by allowing buiesnes to advertise in the magazine for a charge.
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